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S.A.I.N.T. by ~nintendofan408:iconnintendofan408:

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Satanic, Aggressively Insane,  New-age Tigers

Demons destroy one another
Merciless, meaningless manslaughter
Some win wars yet all lose them.
In this wholly unholy ritual

But barbaric beasts they be,
Once they were civil children,
Offspring of God who sprung off
Into a world the all-knowing could not know.

This God, unknowing of this new world,
Eyed his old, untouched, unchanged world,
Touched, turned by time and technology
And angles atrociously became archfiends

Our world overrun, wild, wicked
With demonic demolitions demanding
Life, liberty, luxury, sanity
Maniacs maliciously master the world

Do you feel safe?
©2008-2009 ~nintendofan408
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Well, this is the first poetry I've done in a long time, so I'm a little rusty. To tell the truth, I've been planning this one for a long time. It's taken me a lot of effort to get the words to sound (kind of ) alright, so don't bash it. I can almost guarantee that no one knows what this poem is about (my poetry is very cryptic), and I'm not going to tell you. Feel free to guess in comments, and if you get it right I'll give you a digital cookie.
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~Nortreil:iconNortreil: May 12, 2008, 5:15:55 PM
Either war or corruption.
Maybe hatred...

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And on the 7th day, God created Gordon Freeman.
Yeah, I went there, buddy. Bonk.
~nintendofan408:iconnintendofan408: May 12, 2008, 6:25:05 PM
...D. none of the above.

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Death is for the living. Look into your heart. You know it to be true.
Mood: Joy *accidentalfox:iconaccidentalfox: May 12, 2008, 7:16:37 PM
I love cryptic poetry! :worship:
~nintendofan408:iconnintendofan408: May 12, 2008, 8:13:45 PM
WOOT:w00t:

So, any guesses to the meaning?

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Death is for the living. Look into your heart. You know it to be true.
*Se05239:iconSe05239: May 12, 2008, 9:12:55 PM
Nope.

I would love to give some critique, but I find nothing to criticice.

Really Nice

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I'm writing what I'm thinking. You'll just have to live with that.
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Insanity is the ability to see the truth behind the lies. Since people can't handle the truth, they lock us up... control us... makes us believe... lies...
~nintendofan408:iconnintendofan408: May 13, 2008, 5:24:26 AM
Any guesses to the meaning?

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Death is for the living. Look into your heart. You know it to be true.
*Se05239:iconSe05239: May 13, 2008, 7:01:55 AM
No... I cannot say that I can say it, no.

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I'm writing what I'm thinking. You'll just have to live with that.
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Insanity is the ability to see the truth behind the lies. Since people can't handle the truth, they lock us up... control us... makes us believe... lies...
*accidentalfox:iconaccidentalfox: May 13, 2008, 12:50:40 PM
...er ... ... ...I honestly haven't a clue.
~nintendofan408:iconnintendofan408: May 13, 2008, 2:52:10 PM
...yet in a way all three.

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Death is for the living. Look into your heart. You know it to be true.
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